tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6747125624281016197.post1544482952857032590..comments2023-05-04T06:05:30.017-07:00Comments on Sketch War: R.A.'s self-critique: Advertising EditionR.A. Porterhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851961356321735388noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6747125624281016197.post-3404173503016324582009-02-04T09:27:00.000-07:002009-02-04T09:27:00.000-07:00Well geez, Richard, if you're going to be so hard ...Well geez, Richard, if you're going to be so hard on yourself, what's left for us to do?<BR/><BR/>I agree with your assessment though. I think it would make a great blackout, using the last part.<BR/><BR/>Trust yourself, my man. You know what works.Michael Brownleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12891008781647357688noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6747125624281016197.post-66760138426449666852009-02-03T19:57:00.000-07:002009-02-03T19:57:00.000-07:00Yep, I got that, and I love the concept...the time...Yep, I got that, and I love the concept...the time travel advertising...<BR/><BR/>I also agree that the one scene is a bit longer than necessary...and I think it could use some one-liners, or something funnier, in the meat of it. <BR/><BR/>But (as you probably guessed from a Little White Lion" I like the notion of working toward the one-line ending...David Niall Wilsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10392451335955557831noreply@blogger.com